Letter or email of complaint



Dear Mr. John Smith

I’m writing cos I wanna complain about the shitty service I received from the workers of your holiday resort in Apr. of this year!


That is the opening of a letter of complaint. The message is clear but the way it is expressed is poor, very poor.

How do you suggest making it more formal and polite?

 

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